The Author’s Writing Process
and the Discovery of New Books
May 19, 2014 Stop
When Emma Right asked if I’d be
interested in following her on the World Book Blog Tour, I thought this would
be a fun way to share how different authors write. I am thankful for her invite
and hope you enjoy my few comments. Perhaps I might inspire you to write or
curl up with a good novel and enjoy the world of reading and writing books—of
which there are never enough.
WHO AM I?
I’m Lorilyn Roberts. My closest
friends would probably describe me as the brave woman who went around the world
and adopted two beautiful daughters as a single mother. Now that one daughter
is almost raised and the other one thinks she’s raised (and I won’t say which
is which), I have more time to write. I went back to school at an old age
(but still young at heart) and received my Master of Arts in Creative Writing
last year.
WHAT ARE YOU WORKING ON?
I am 55,000 words into the
first draft of the second book in my YA Christian Fantasy Series, Seventh Dimension - The King. The total length will be 65,000 words and I should finish
The King in about a week.
HOW DOES YOUR WRITING PROCESS
WORK?
First, I research. Second, I
think. Third, I come up with the plot points – the beginning (problem), the
middle (the process), and the end (the crescendo and the resolution).
After I do the above, I am
assured I have a skeleton for a future book. Then I will use an online program
called Hiveword Online Fiction Organizer
and James
Scott Bell’s Knockout Novel aid. The two programs work in tandem and
help me to organize my thoughts and begin writing. I think in terms of scenes
and outline all my scenes first.
The Hiveword Organizer allows me
to move the scenes around. It also has other features, options for multiple
plotlines, character development, writing prompts (even suggestions for names
if I can’t come up with one) and scene summaries that can be stored for future
reference.
After my scenes are titled and loosely
described, then I do more research for those I’m less sure about. I keep an
excel file with a link to all the sites I visit that I might want to revisit when
I actually write the scene. I will insert notes from the website into the scene
organizer for quick reference.
Once I have all the characters,
scenes, and plot lines developed, then I write each scene. This is when I add
the spiritual component, foreshadowing, symbolism, emotion, et cetera. In other
words, I give the scene life. A love scene is not like a rose by any other
name. It’s my unique love scene. The protagonist is not just facing life or
death—he must face other issues that will worry the reader, like honor, truth, and
sacrifice. I raise the stakes. If I’m not engaged in the scene, I rethink it
through or I remove the scene entirely.
I allow myself the option to
change things, but more often than not, each scene I’ve outlined grows and becomes
even more than what I meant it to be. Since I know where I’m going, I can work
on the boundaries of the scene—how far can I go with this idea? I let my mind
create, create, create. This is my favorite part of writing. I put no
limitations on where my mind takes me.
Real change happens at the
boundaries of life, and therefore, it should be that way in books. As God our
Creator chisels away on our rough edges and refines us into the person He
created us to be, I refine each scene (even in the first draft because I love
to edit), and hopefully make each scene unique and memorable.
As an aside, I could never do
the Nano Challenge. I can’t think in terms of outcome so early in the process—or
worry about a word count. I enjoy the process of writing too much to rush it.
I do the actual writing in one
of two ways, depending on my mood. I either type the words directly into
Microsoft Word on my laptop, or if I want to write a lot of words in one day, I
type the words directly on my stenograph machine and then make a text file and
copy and paste it into Microsoft Word later.
I provide closed captioning for television and if I’m on the air several hours at a time, it would not be
unusual to write close to 200,000 words in one day. Perhaps that sounds grueling
but it’s not. When you are writing 200 to 250 words per minute, the words add
up quickly.
The stenograph machine works
well for writing a lot of words in a short span of time, but if I have the time
and luxury, I’d rather sit on the sofa in the living room and type on my laptop,
drinking coffee. I enjoy the process of writing, particularly if I’m writing difficult
description or an emotional scene. The stenograph machine is very mechanical, too much like work, but it’s a nice way to get
a lot of words written that I can edit later if feel like I’m getting behind in
my word count—those days when I set one, which is not every day.
After the first draft, I will
take a break for at least a few days to two weeks and then come back and edit.
I love the editing process. I am surprised that most writers don’t, but my first
draft of anything is so beneath what I’m capable of when it’s polished that I
can’t wait to edit. I also belong to Word Weavers and will frequently take in
scenes for critiquing.
The editing process takes
longer for me than the first draft. After I’ve reached the point where I can no
longer be objective, I’ll submit the manuscript to beta readers.
I’ll give the
readers some general questions to answer based on what I feel might be
weaknesses, confusing scenes, or some other point that’s important to me.
After I receive their
responses, I’ll make changes. This can be quite time-consuming, but this
process is critical, especially for indie authors. Beta readers can take your
“average” book and make it a “good” book or even a great book. I can’t imagine
publishing a book and not having beta readers critique it first and tell me what
needs to be fixed. At this point, I cannot be objective. I need readers to help
me see any weaknesses, and I want that to happen before my book is published.
One and two-star reviews can hurt a book’s future popularity. I don’t want
those kinds of negative reviews because I was too much in a hurry and published
my book before it was ready.
After I’ve gone through the
beta process, I give a copy of my manuscript to my first editor who reads my book
for content. After I make her suggested corrections, I then submit my book to a
second editor who goes through the manuscript again. This editor also reads for
content, but she focuses more on copyediting that has been missed. Things like
leaving off a quote or having two periods at the end of a sentence.
Once I’ve finished this final
edit (hopefully), I upload my specially formatted Mobi file to Amazon, but I don’t
tell anyone. I want to download my book on my Kindle before anyone else.
Sometimes I’ll find weird things, like a formatting error on the copyright page.
You don’t want an error on that page screaming “amateur.”
Sometimes when I fix one thing,
I inadvertently mess up something else. After all the work that’s gone into my book
at this point, I want it perfect. I might do several uploads to Amazon before I
announce my book’s availability. I usually raise the price when I first publish
it, like to $9.99 – no one will buy my Kindle book at that price. Once I feel
like everything is fixed that has been missed, then I will reduce the price to
$2.99 and promote my newly published book. Then the real work begins. Marketing
a book is much harder than writing it.
HOW DOES MY WORK DIFFER FROM
OTHERS?
I don’t know. I try not to
compare myself with others. How similar or different my writing is from other
authors is very subjective. Contemporary fantasy authors I like to read are
Randy Alcorn and Lois Lowry. An Undiscovered Christian fantasy author who I
like and predict someday will be well known is Janalyn Voigt. Classical fantasy
authors I enjoy are C.S. Lewis and JRR Tolkien. My favorite book of all time is
Pilgrim’s Progress. After reading
books by these authors, I find myself admiring their talent—and inspired. I
hope someday to write a book that will touch others the way their books have touched
me.
WHY DO I WRITE WHAT I DO?
I have a story to tell. The Bible
says in Luke 19:37-40, as Jesus neared Jerusalem, the multitude of disciples
rejoiced and praised God with a loud voice. When the Pharisees asked Jesus to
rebuke His disciples, He answered, “I tell you, if these were silent, the very
stones would cry out.”
If I don’t write, I will go to
my grave with regret. I know God made me to write and writing draws me near to
His presence. I must write or I’ll feel like I missed out on God’s perfect will
for my life.
He has redeemed too much of my past
not to share it—either through fiction or nonfiction. When God blesses us, He
expects us to give those blessings away. If we don’t use the talents He gives
us, He might take our gift or gifts and give them to someone else. I would hate
to stand before my Savior and see His scarred wrists and confess, “God, it was
too hard. It was too heavy a burden to bear.” Never! As long as I am breathing
and not demented, I will write and share what God has done—through whatever
story or means He imparts on my heart. Whether anyone reads my books is an
outcome I don’t control. I can only control the process—writing, and that’s
what I love doing most.
*~*~*~*
WHO IS NEXT ON THE WORLD BOOK
BLOG TOUR?
**
Meet Katherine
Harms: Katherine and her husband
Larry live aboard a bluewater cruising sailboat and cruise the east coast and
the Bahamas. It is the perfect writing environment. In 2008, she published Oceans of Love, a collection of
meditations based on biblical texts that refer to oceans and water. That same
year she wrote her first blog post. She experimented with varieties of blogging
topics and blog hosting options. Currently she writes four blogs, of which Living on Tilt is
the flagship.
Katherine has published
articles in several magazines including The
Lutheran, Christ in Our Home, Cruising World, and Living Aboard. Her only novel, Hannah’s
Journal, won third place in the Christian Writers Guild’s First Novel
Contest in 2004. Since that time, she has focused primarily on nonfiction. She
also writes materials for worship and faith formation such as guides for
worship, prayer vigils and Bible study.
In addition, she edits book-length
manuscripts and provides mentoring for writers. Internet and phone services
maintain her availability to her clients in most locations.
Katherine’s current work in
progress is Thrive! Don’t Just Survive: a
Guide for Christian Interaction with a Secular Culture.
**
Meet Robin Johns Grant: Robin Johns
Grant has been writing for most of her life. In fact, she's been following her
publishing dream so long that she crowned herself The Queen of Perseverance on
her blog, where she encourages other weary dreamers.
While waiting for her writing to pay
off, she wrote and edited university publications, managed an office for a firm
of private investigators, and worked as a university financial aid counselor.
She also did a lot of crazy fan stuff and developed fascinations with books and
movies like Harry Potter and Star
Wars, which helped her dream up Jeanine
and Jamie for Summer's Winter.
With a degree in English and a
mid-life crisis coming on, she returned to school and earned a master's degree
in library and information science in 2005. She now has her best day job ever
as a college librarian, which keeps her young by allowing her to hang out with
students.
Robin lives in Georgia with her
wonderful husband Dave and formerly feral feline, Mini Pearl. She is also
surprised to find herself part owner of a wonderful pit bull puppy named Pete
who showed up as a stray at her mom's house.
